what more do you want from me?
This seed carried from a crying star.
Life circling 'round, never ending thoughts.
twinkling beyond the dark and light.
Come blind me, for you're too ugly inside.
Do you not understand that I fall?
This seed that cries from a star.
Gravity overcomes and I loose.
The fight not won, slipping further.
Will I die if I hit the ground softly?
This seed which cried from a star.
Dirt is so hard, I won't penatrate deep.
Wither and dissapear for I will not grow.
The pain so heavy though, will force me down.
This seed carried from a crying star.
I'm falling, pushed into the black of space.
Where or where has the stars gone?
This seed that cried from the last star.
This surrounding encloser sufficating.
Alas, the light swells around me.
The joy of a breath takin and givin.
This seed carried from a crying star...
brought life from the depths of dark within
Author notes
have no clue what this is, just wrote, lol.
Written August 6th, 2006
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I know you wrote this a while ago but I am just now getting to it. Plz forgive me. Anywho, This is so sad, it made me want to cry. But as always a good write. I miss you so much and have tons to tell you. And I do mean tons. Call me sometime. We need to talk. Love ya gurl and give Mr. Aiden a hug and kiss for me.
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Interesting
interesting....it doesn't make a lot of sense but that's prolly b/c i don't know where its coming from...as i'm sure you don't either...i once read a book that said that artists...writers and such are possessed by the old greats to write....thus i tend to believe that if we don't know where our stuff is coming from then we were prolly possessed by a great one...don't know just felt like sharing my my thoughts for a minute i guess and again i say interesting poem. -
incredible
wow. holy cow.
this was fantastic, Andrea. VERY beautiful. and it doesn't have to make sense. All of AFI's old shit never made sense and it was still really good. Like this poem. And you wrote it with such feeling.. such emotion... and it's too damn sad!!!!!
Don't make me cry!!! 
Anyways. I miss and love you. I hope everything goes well.
Love ya.
Jennifer -
thanks.
it does hav ea story behind it in a way, a seed that came form a star falling to earth, hoping it will dive deep enough into teh earth so it will grow, not knowing if it will live or not, i guess. thansk for reading!
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hmmmmm, interesting, I like it, lol, I'm not exactly sure what it is but in some way it's insightful. Sometimes when I write poetry I won't know what I'm writing, lol, weird how that happens
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