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my child

Hey little baby,
I'm scared.
I don't think
I'm ready for this,
for you.
This wasn't part
of my plans.
I'm not sure
I can handle this,
alone.
How will I know
what to do.
He doesn't care
about me,
or us.
How can I bring forth
a child.
I'm frightened,
anxious and
confused.
I'm gonna try my best,
what else can I do.
I can feel you
deep inside,
growing everyday.
Someone besides myself
to think about.
My baby,
my life,
my child.



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Written August 6th, 2006

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  • SyntheticSoul
    August 8, 2006
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    2 broken thumbs up

    I wish you luck...parenthood is a scary thought, but you got to do the best you can to make the best for you and your family....

  • Kenshins wife
    August 6, 2006
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    breathtaking

    aww this was sad and adorable. It's hard when your pregnate no one plans it but I'll tell you from experiance than once it comes you'll be lost in everything but as the child grows you'll never regret having it. just don't give it up. that's the biggest mistake you can do. I know I've been through it. read my Taken poem. you'll know what I mean. but great poem.