Blade upon my pillow
Gleaming in the light
Will this be my last
Dark and lonely night?
Maybe I'll end it all
For I can't take it anymore
Maybe now I'll get the courage
To lay dead upon the floor
I pick it up, it feels cold
I clench my fist, ready
Hold my breath
So my shaky hands stays steady
One slice across
The pain is so great
But I keep going
So I can seal my fate
Blood falls everywhere
All upon the floor
But yet I smile
Because I won't live anymore
Then I collapse
In my bloody pool
Because the world
Was so mean and cruel
I close my eyes
And I slowly slip away
Never to wake
Never to see another day
Author notes
I READY THE RULES
Option 5~ Dark
Written August 6th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Love,Hurt,Lost,Rape,Dark!!MANY CHOICES AND SEE! by Shannon62875.
325 points, ended August 14, 2006, 11 entries
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WOW!! this is a great write i love it so much!! its really dark! just what i was looking for.. you sure got a talent in poetry! Good luck in my contest and keep up the great work...(srry its takin so long to judge i just been so busy)
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u are such a good writer! i no how this feels so it really touched me. good work, keep it up
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OMG this is freaking good! haha you should check out my new one! YAY! -
wow thats dark. i LOVE it! hope you do good good luck
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