Waves crash the rain-drenched shores
Sparks between two lovers ignite
Between the strikes of sizzling light
Flesh to flesh, their bodies caress
Thunder roars throughout the skies
Matched by their gasps and sighs
Between the strikes of sizzling light
Lips touch, tongues roam, sensual kiss
Rivulets, exotic heat, emits seductive hiss
Matched by their gasps and sighs
A culmination to slowly peak
Rhythmic flowing, unified, leaving them both weak
Rivulets, exotic heat, emits seductive hiss
As flesh to flesh, their bodies caress
Waves crash the rain-drenched shores
The storm, their love possessed
Rhythmic flowing, unified, leaving them both weak
Together, in orgasmic ecstasy
A tempestuous flow to set them free
The storm, their love possessed
In sensations they can't hide
Their pleasures undenied
A tempestuous flow to set them free
Lightning crackles through the air
To mark the height of their affair
Their pleasures undenied
Ecstasy climbs higher yet
A night of love they won't forget
To mark the height of their affair
The storm, their love possessed
Rhythmic flowing, unified, leaving them both weak
Storm's passing, two lovers come to rest
Author notes
May not be what you're looking for. Chuck it if it sucks, lol.
The form is one I started writing, calling it ripple, and doubled it here,
Written August 6th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensual Rain by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended August 11, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks hun, appreciate it
Storm -
Double ripple, I see what you mean
Really good, intensity and passion merged with the storm imagery its a fantastic story and passionate refrain, twice.
Makes me tired just thinking about it. lol
Adrian -
LOL, and once more, I will thank you. Apprciate it hun.
Storm -
ill just applaud it and tell you one more time, that i love your writing.
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LOL, ok, ok. I am working the kinks on this form I am doing and then to make it a double. I figured all that repition and well, you know. But then again, I could repeat love like that over and over
I may have another one coming your way. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the comments hun
Storm -
Why in the name of heaven would I "chuck" it?!?!?!? Girlfriend! This is...yeah..this is!
I LOVED this! It's totally cool; totally sensual and it blows me away in the best ways
THANK YOU for sharing and for entering! I knew I could count on you!
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I watch more then u know
hehe lol you did wonderful and I LOVE the background 
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Damn, I didn't even get the background up and you were reading it, lol.
Thank you for the comments. Appreiciate it hun
Storm -
Loved it!
Wow sis I loved your flow here. You did incredible. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Kari
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