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Angel

Body arched and broken
Wrapped in deaths veil
Forever to remain obscured and forgotten

Wings curled, enfolding
Slit and gashed
Cradling the body
Hands wrapped tightly across chest
Comforting

Head bowed
Softly weeping
Tears fall
  Cascading
Downward
Falling on charred and scorched earth

Eyes, emerald  green
Soulless and hollow
Hiding pain
Eternally

An angel
A shell
Fallen
Forgotten

Author notes

Yes I know this poem is sorta eh *shrugs* not really good but I'm working on it. Tell me what you like and don't like.
Written August 5th, 2006

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