Rippled waves befall the night
She watches from the flow
Eyes so soft, aglow
Cascades of heaven upon her wings
She steals the soul of love
From the fragile world above
Eyes so soft, aglow
She haunts the mortal of the night
Drown slowly in her light
From the fragile world above
Feel her one last kiss
Fade quickly in the mist
Drown slowly in her light
Cascades of heaven upon her wings
Rippled waves befall the night
With the lonesome tune she sings
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Written August 5th, 2006
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Thank you Curt, appreciate your comments hun.
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Thank you for your comments sweetie, appreciate it.
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I suppose eventually they will.
I saw this pic, was going to use it for one of my picture contests, but the write just kind of jumped out at me.
Thanks for the comments hun, appreciate it
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Storm, a truly magical write, the imagery melded with the wonderful presentation, grab the reader, and force them deeper into this intensly emotional piece. Excellent job.
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Ooooh, that is very beautifully sad! I see a whole lot of beauty than I do see the sadness. But then again, the sadness usually creates the beauty. Awesome work!
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Deep n Sad
awwwwwwwwwwww sweetheart things will get better...
I love ya sis
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