All alone I'm sitting here
Among all these people
No one know who I am
Let alone cares
If I could be enough
To be noticed
If I could be worth
Being seen
Maybe my life
Would be more grand
Maybe I would have joy
All my life
I've been without
And starved to death within
Being alone is killing me now
And so it is with me
To live and die
Without a glance
From others around me
And with this I fall to eternity.
A contest entry
- What does it mean to be ALONE? by WhenWillsCollide.
575 points, ended May 30, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a truly longging write for more than what others see you for i have been there this write was felled with pashon and such emoson i loved it
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Thanks.
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I love it!! there is so much depth to this, you have really caught the mood.
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devestation personified!
well done! this is the typic "life gone bad" thing and hits home...
I would make a long comment like the others but I've been swamped with entries!
sorry.... well done -
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Thanks!
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Oh, my bad. I entered it a while back, like when I first got here. I guess that's not really that long ago, but it feels like it. I didn't get here 'till like the 5th of August or something like that.
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Very good!
I said no trophies, that means in all. But this is good. I'll comment on it becuase its good. But dont take it down, im thinking bout changing it a lil. ill keep in touch tho. Did u enter it in a contest on AP? -
Great poem. i really like this write. Your emotions are very strong and powerful. You express yourself very well. Nicely written. Good flow. Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck in my contest. ttyl Tali
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Very emotional, good flow and sad too.
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Strong emotions and well written. Two thumbs up!
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Eventhough the words and the structure are both quite simple the effect is amazing! There is so much power within these lines!Beautifuly written!Well done!
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