When I look at you,
and you turned away.
You left without ever knowing,
knowing that I loved you so.
Some say you did know,
others said you didnt care!
Is that true?
That hurts the most;
The fact that you never loved me!
Please come back to me...
Tell me why?
Why must this be so?
Am I not good enough for you?
Well atleast before you go,
May I please have my heart back???
Broken or not!
Author notes
Written August 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- you be the judge by KirstenWar.
300 points, ended September 13, 2006, 9 entries
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aww thank you for ur kind words.... i have found the love of my life... i wrote this on a past love.
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Save your love for someone who deserves it
It helps to air your feelings this way though
Jill/Cherry xxx -
great
A very sad and touching piece.. I think everyone can relate to this at one time or another..
good luck in the contest
Dusty -
i love it because i can relate to it. a guy i [heart] left bc he didnt know what to do or how to deal with it then he made up the excuse your there, im here, i cant date someone i dont even see. loser...anyways i love it, full of emotion. you'll find someone else that will love you forever. thanks for entering
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Wow this is poem is really good. I really like it.
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Excellent write
The answers we al seek I am sure why do you treat me this way, why can you not believe my feelings for you are true. This poem relates to my first wife for me when she left and said it was nothing to do with me her words (your a wonderful man its me). Oh how these feeling you have penned I know so well and even today 16 years later I am stil none the wiser but have learned that our hearts belong to us, we only give and share the love that is held there within. I hope that you can do as I and reclaim your heart as yours to share that love with another instead of waisting it on someone who is not wanting to share it with you. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us in this contest with this brilliant write. wishing you the best of luck Brian.
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