Prime time robbery in NYC..
as the media plays team ball
to suppress the worker bee.
Their law acts for patriotism,
are treason clearly...
Backed up by cover up cargo's
being shipped out overseas.
And yet they had me thinking
America was the disease.
And contemplating bombing them
rather than planning peace.
When all the time the propper wolf
was wairing the golden fleece.
Parading unimaginably
down the richest streets..
We are Romulus and Remus
and were sucking on his teats.
Watching Colosseum action
Live on the silver screens..
As the was theatres pounding
to percussion from machines,
and the desert sand is crawling
with the footprints of Marines...
Stealing our world reality
while were living off dreams...
Author notes
just a begining i think.... the end of the beginning
Written August 5th, 2006
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The next time you enter a contest, you might try reading the rules:
IMAGERY is the first thing I look for. If there is no imagery, you will not win.
You have no imagery in this.
Absolutely NO rhyming poems.
This rhymes, and not even consistantly.
Spelling and grammar count.
You have three spelling errors and a grammar mistake.
You have absolutely no chance of winning this contest.
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define interesting... Samuel Johnson may have found it so
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I was very much taken by this couplet...
"When all the time the propper wolf
was wairing the golden fleece."
Very interesting choice of words.
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