Can't stop the pain
Unable to fight the blade
Try your best to fight it
Too late you've done it
Into depression you fade
Not able to get out
Getting sucked in more and more
Slice open veins
Killing whats left of your soul
Inside your dieing
Not soon enough it seems
Feelings of joy fill your body
Love the high you get
Out comes the blood
Wishing you hadn't done it
It comes out more and more
Now you can't stop the blood
Getting all over the floor
Bound to your death
Laying there helpless
Out comes your last breath
On to the after life you go
Death has now come
Author notes
In case you didn't notice on the side it says
CUTTING SKIN FLOWING BLOOD
wink wink The title..lol
die muthafucka die
Written August 5th, 2006
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- darkness hurt pain and heartbreak by BlackBloodyRose.
300 points, ended November 1, 2006, 37 entries
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wow that was heaps good um i dono wat else 2 say so good luck in this contest and bye
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lol i love this soo powerful and so amazingly worded very good and outstanding piece
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WOW, this was a pretty intense poem, so beautiful and so dark, you did a great job with this piece, loved it
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You are the best dark poetry writer i come across! ur poems are exactly how it is & the feelings just come out of the computer screen. great job!
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this 'is' a pretty graphic poem...
but once again youve shown your mastery of the morbid technique -
damn... nice accrostic
shit i wish i could write em this good.
pretty graphic poem
CJ
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