for years
i've loved you.
your strength.
your imperfections.
while i myself
quietly search
for answers in
lost shadows
among mirrors.
always gazing gazing
wondering wondering
why and how
i found you.
only you.
Author notes
Written August 4th, 2006
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Comments
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Hey!
Thank you for your entry .. I like this.. its to the point, honest and from your heart...definitely something I was looking for. Thank you!
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This was short and sweet...in a way. I liked it...and I can't really think of anything else to say considering the fact that I'm unnaturally tired. But good job! Good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!
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This leaves me wondering as well, just as you were doing in the end... gazing and lost in your thoughts. I could lose myself in your poem just by recollecting memories and emotions from the past and trying to sort them all out. This is a very good write, and I enjoyed the read.
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Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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Very adorable. A bit repetitive, but I believe it makes the statement all-the-more powerful. Nice poem. Thanks for your entry & good luck in my contest.
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Very sweet. I love the emotion expressed here. Good luck in all the contests.
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aww...a sweet little write full of beauty from the heart! i enjoyed reading! thanks for the entry!! xxx
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i liek this poem good job and good luck in my contest
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Short, simple, and utterly awesome! Welldone on a fab write.
Goodluck in the contest.
Emily x -
This is just amazing. That feeling of finding "the one" is all consuming and woderful. Great poem. I liked it a lot,
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. We've been married 47 years...and I still find him special. I'm glad you liked this poem!! Warm Regards...vivela
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fewer words said can send a bigger message to your readers...and that's why i like this poem...good job!
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Thank you for reading a lifetime. I appreciate your good thoughts. Warm Regards..vivela
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yea i know what you are trying to show here
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments!! You've made my day!! I really appreciate your words!! Warm Regards....vivela
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while i myself
quietly search
for answers in
lost shadows
among mirrors.
always gazing gazing
wondering wondering
why and how
i found you.
I can see here your heart as poet..a true poet..a great poet as well..
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Thank you for your very kind words. It was written from the heart. I hope the reader can tell that. Many thanks!!
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Love the simplicity of this write which expresses the emotion of "love" so very clearly. This is an awesome write and I'm sure all who read it will be able to relate to it!
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Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed reading lifetime. I appreciate your kind words!! Warm Regards...vivela
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Very Well Written!
This is a really beautiful heartfelt piece! I enjoyed reading it
Shannon -
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. They are very dear!! Best Wishes to you!! Warm Regards...vivela
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This is truly amazing! With so few words you have composed a million in love... So very well written and expressed. A joy to read! Best wishes!
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Thank you for your reaction. I'm glad you enjoyed the little piece. I appreciate your reading a lifetime. Warm Regards..vivela
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Oddly enough, I really liked this poem. You conveyed the simplicity of love so perfectly. It's a very nice little piece. Well done.
-Cory
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Thank you for sharing a bit of your life. I'm sorry it didn't work out!! This marriage has been through many ups nad downs but we still love each other and are grateful we found one another. Thank you for your comment. Warm Regards..vivela
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this is beautiful! ...its so simple but it speaks out to me...i can relate so much...it reminded me of this one boyfriend i had...he loved me no matter what but we broke up beccause i couldnt love myself and i was always afraid i was too crazy for anyone to love me and i wasnt able to tell him how i felt about my problems...so yeah sorry about rambling on =]
anyways thanks for sharing this!
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Thank you for youe enthusiasm! I love your comment. Warm Regards...vivela
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Thank you for your very kind words!! It has been a long wonderful lifetime!! Warm Regards...vivela
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So full of emotion! This is great! Keep that pen flowing. Thanks for sharing!
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This was beautiful...a dream that has come to fruition. Great work..Thank you for sharing
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Thank you for reading a lifetime. I appreciate your comment!! Warm Regards...vivela
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Good emotions. Tanks for sharing.
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