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Broken Wings

Maybe I'm not meant for life
maybe life is meant for me
I wish I was a bird
so I could fly away so free

I wish I could leave the past behind
along with all my crimes
lost inside this life
but found inside my rhymes

telling of the dark-side
words regain my pain
left in life for dead
but rhymes relight the flame

shit I feel so crazy
but the world don't even care
thoughts provoke my brain
while my mind is laid out bare

naked as the truth I speak
soaking in my madness
never feeling happy
lost inside my sadness

I will to fly so high
but broken wings don't never heal
lost inside myself
that's just how I feel






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Written August 4th, 2006

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  • Damselflydreams
    August 7, 2006
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    I love this one, overwhelming honesty, each line a winner as it hits the mark. Bravo.


  • blueyez
    August 5, 2006
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    wow! As usual a wonderful write! I always love the ending to poems. But the middle lines;

    naked as the truth I speak
    soaking in my madness
    never feeling happy
    lost inside my sadness

    I can really relate to this feeling! Much props as always!


  • dustookie2
    August 4, 2006
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    tomorrow is a new day

    sad is what i feel in this but you know how i feel walk in peace is my wish for you. excellent write. always from the heart