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Lay down beside me

Come lay down beside me
Wrap your arms around this wanting heart
Remind me of what love is
And I hope, to do my part

I can't take another night
In this cold and lonely bed
It time, I recall memories
Of long lost better days

I need your touch, your sigh
I need your smile, tonight
I need to kiss, to love
like it was, the very first time

I need to hold you tight
feel you next to me
caress your body, kiss you
till the morning lite

It's been way to long
let's make up for lost time
It's something that we both need
and you know it's about time

Author notes

Ok I'm horney, what can I say. I being a bad boy. But sometimes you just have to write what you feel.
Written August 4th, 2006

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  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    August 4, 2006
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    Not a bad boy, just have needs like we all do. Very honest and a very good write. Flows together real well. Blessings


  • gullionmar
    August 4, 2006
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    hey man we'ere all human and godmade us to have needs lol very different kind of writing for you but its done really well baaaddddd boy lol

  • June-bug
    August 4, 2006
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    seductive

    Hey, whatever it takes, you just have to say what you think.. or in some cases what you feel. You Bad Boy! lol


  • AALouisiana
    August 4, 2006
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    good stuff...thought provoking...:f

    I have to concur with the comment above. This is a honest look at your feelings. Keep on writing this kind of stuff.


  • August 4, 2006
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    another very honest write and you are not a "bad boy" for having desires. it is called "being part of the human race" and i admire your courage to write from such an honest place~ i wish for you all that you desire and that your heart, and body is blessed with all of the above that you so openly write of~
    creatively written and i enjoyed this very much~
    thank you for sharing this most enlightening piece~
    lynn

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