Well I stand about six foot five
over 200 pounds and free
Kinda rugged on the outside
But a gentleman thats me
I let my fingers do the talking
When I hold a woman tight
And my kisses never stop
as my caress takes flight
I don't really like to rush
I wouldn't want to miss a thing
If you knew how good you felt to me
You'd know why I want to sing
So please open up your mind
And let me come inside
Draw out the passion
That you have tried to hide
Let me show you
How good it can be
Because it takes two to build heat
Let's make that you and me
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Dedicated to all the women that will pass by this lonily heart. But this was more for fun and an attempt to be sexy, romantic, playful
Written August 4th, 2006
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I'm willing to bet youve thought about this one in "C" make a great country music song
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Beautiful Poem
I adore this poem! each stanza has something that appeals and tugs at a lady's heartstrings!
The last two lines of your third stanza:
"If you knew how good you felt to me
You'd know why I want to sing"
says it all! those words alone show the depths of the emotions evoked by your love for a certain lady. I liken it to opening a doorway, walking out into the black, velvet night, seeing and experiencing the Northern Lights and Milky Way all in one!
Beautiful beyond compare!
~Katie~
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nice poem, that's a subject that seems to always inpsire people to write. I like it. well done
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juicy
you know that juicy feeling you get right after you pop a nice sweet candy in your mouth? thats what this poem did for me. it was sweet and juicy, but elegant like a black tux and a single red rose all at once. beautiful write! -
WONDERFUL POEM
This one makes me smile Charlie.
I know how you feel. To be held all night long by the one you love, wow, nothing better then that. This was a beautiful poem. So heartfelt and honest. I am sure there are some woman on here who wished you were writing this to them. Sometimes they may be to shy. You keep pouring 
:0 your heart out my friend. It makes for amazing emotional poetry. Thank you for the much needed smiles. Take care. Blessing to you. Sandy
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Very playful indeed. And romantic. Another good write.
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very nice
This is really cute, you have succeeded in bringing out all the things you wanted to. This is sexy, romantic and playful. -
oo lala, (lol) SEXY... i could really see a picture as i was reading. great job.
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well you sure described yourself well my friend,and i agree with you on every aspect to.meant to be playful and fun ,but i hope this is aimed at your special someone across the seas here at home .well beautifully written,was very nice to read something so pure and honest loved it charlie your friend mary
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your poem is sweet with a sprinkling of humour yet written with very true emotions from an obvious tender heart. i smiled while reading as you are so honest and it is very refreshing to read ~
wonderfully written and thank you for the smiles~
bless you~
lynn
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