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my hidden place

My hidden place. What do you think that is?
Under a bed? In the shadow?
No, my only hiding place is poetry.

To get rid of all the stress that's before me.
I write for relief, to get away from the real world.
Picture me bundled up in shadow like a little girl.

I feel like I'm fading away, I'm lost inside,
When no one is around, I break down and cry.
Only way I can let my emotions out,
When my teardrops are the only sounds that are made.
I'm so lost, I just wish I would fade.

So away I go,
I'ma take my life with one single blow

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This just how i'm feeling right now, how I can't be with the one i love. so If you read this I hope you comment and help me feel better
Written August 4th, 2006

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  • Twilight Moon
    November 3, 2006
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    yeah i can relate ive been tryin to gt my bstfrnd to understand tht poetry is my relief source..yeah i know how you feel and you are not alone


  • Infinite Butterfly
    August 4, 2006
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    Wow. I really like it. I feel the same way. Poetry is a good relif though. Suicide is not the way. I wont push that though. I hope things get better.

    Nightmare Escape