Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

silence


No one writes poetry anymore.

The silence is filled instead
with the loud beating of anguished hearts
muffled sobs and faint cries for help
that are answered by no one.

No one sees our pain.

I want to help you
I want to share your sorrow and your joy
I want to open my own heart to you
but in this silence
we can only stare at one another
and squint into the depths of our seperate hearts
wishing we could read the poetry there.

Author notes

I keep logging in to see if there's anything new by my friends and being disappointed. But I'm not posting anything either, so... yeah.
Written August 4th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • ArrowToAshes
    August 18, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    except that there's no evidence to the contrary...

    =P


  • chat noir
    August 5, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    i havnt written much since senior project was over with...

    could i have possibly been SICK OF POERTY?!







    no, probably not.


  • wohadreambig
    August 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    i can relate to this just because there hasn't been much for me to commment on lately either and i haven't really been inspired to write anything because the contest topics are so repettive and it seems like the same thing over and over again

    nicely done
    Janine