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Mona Lisa Smile(Rondelet)

Mona Lisa
What caused her to smile so divine
Mona Lisa
Was it the large slice of Pizza
And bottle of Chianti wine
Or Leonardo's funny line
Mona Lisa.

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Written August 4th, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    December 1, 2007
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    Lol Actually, it's quite a fun image I got in my head, when I saw the slice of pizza in front of her while she was posing

    Quite a creative poem you have written here - thank you for entering the contest - wishing you the best of luck!
    Leander


  • Desire gold member
    August 8, 2006
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    Creative and Funny!!


    When you said Pizza and Chianti wine
    I almost made a few trips
    Thoroughly enjoyed this write and you versed in form!
    Kudos to YOU!!
    Very Creative!!

    Wish You the best in the contest!
    Many blessings to YOU
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Mary O gold member
    August 5, 2006
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    I have to say, I'm enjoying everone's interpretations here. I think a little wine and a funny line, yes. Very cute. good one. Good luck to you, Billard


  • catz Moderators member
    August 4, 2006
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    Yep, that pizza and wine will do it every time And Leo's sense of humour... is that a forced smile perhaps?

    Good job, Billbard ... Good luck in the contest and thank you for entering

    Dee


  • Kari gold member
    August 4, 2006
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    Good!

    This was very clever. You did a good job.
    Good Luck!

    Kari

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