sun not in the sky
nature’s call, national park
the leopard crawls, jumps.
Author notes
Written August 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- The Greatest Options Contest Ever! by neoladyem.
300 points, ended August 18, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku's About Water 'n' stuff... Prewrites Welcome by PerVirtuous.
1300 points, ended August 18, 2007, 55 entries
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800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rounds Contest [Dune Buggy] Round One by Naridill.
360 points, ended October 7, 2007, 16 entries
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What did you think
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Forms restrict alot, I feel this is the perfect example. I feel it needs more depth. At the moment, its like a quote, not a poem.
Thanks for entering & much luck.
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this is a great Haiku and I love the cat you used for it
Riftkin -
Very pretty haiku ... congrats on the silver!
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This is a full blown haiku You have the 5-7-5 and you have a slight reference to time of you as well as the type of day or time of day and you have the aha! when the leopard crawls and then jumps. Well done I will read this again
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nice
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Thank you very much for your nice comments. You write lot of Haiku. So it gives me extra pleasure that you liked this one. Thank you again.
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I don't really read alot of haikus that invole animals, so great job on being really creative and talented with this one. I like how you tell about the animals too.
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Thank you very much Raquel. I liked it.
Edited on Aug 08, 11:35 p.m. because ''. -
Great Haiku
Another great Haiku, just great -
Thank you very much MissStranger. All the best.
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Beautifully written! 3 challanging lines with a splendid effect! Well done! I admire so much those who can embrace haiku with such talent!
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