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dad

I will never be
Good enough
For you
Especially after all the shit that ive been through

Cracked
With a board
Smacked
With a belt

Only if you know
All the pain
That ive felt

Locked
In my room
For days
And more to come

You took my life
everything I had
as I take a knife
why does this have to end so sad

Just a mistake to the world
I was never meant to be
So end my life
And let my spirit run free

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Written August 4th, 2006

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  • taetae43
    August 4, 2006
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    Wow,this is really outstanding.This is so powerful and it just effects the way I think about things.I have it so good in my life just because I have two loving parents that went through this and would never put me and my siblings through what they went through when they were kids.This poem really makes me count my blessings that I have been given in my life.