When I close my eyes, we are always together.
Four sisters sitting side by side, blissfully innocent.
I hear the songbirds and feel the cool wind blowing off the lake.
Sixty years has not dimmed those memories, and I go back often
Every time I close my eyes.
Author notes
Written August 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- four in a row... x by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended August 8, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful work here my friend!
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Thanks Joan,
missed everyone on Friday, maybe I'll make it next week. -
Excellent thought process in this poem. Great imagery. Makes a beautiful memory. Good luck in the contest.
Joan -
Thanks BFD, sorry to have used your name as the title, but it just seemed to fit nicely with the words.
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This is a beautiful entry so full of heartfelt imagery. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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I love this, the imagery of the past so clearly shown. Great work!
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