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Blossom

tight closed flower buds
very soon will petals ope
lovely blooms emerge.

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Written April 8th, 2003

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  • BrokenDownPalace
    April 9, 2003
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    this is a very beautiful write. specialy since we are now approching spring...to bad it snowed a couple nights ago...nevertheless, i feel as if you handled this write with great care and though. wonderful write. keep up the good work...because i'm always reading.

    lots of love
    mojdeh