Loneliness enfolds me--
holds me--
frozen hands arund my heart,
it flutter-throbs in the ice grip.
A cold and empty lover,
lips to thin air,
choking on the nothingness
of being alone.
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Written August 3rd, 2006
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It was short But I liked it. It doesn't matter really matter because if you can express a hundred things in two sentences. you have said enough. I think it was great write. keep up the good work.Can you gice feedback on my poem Footprints on the wall.
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great
great work short and to the point you express your self really good in this work i think it was amazing keep up the great writting and have fun with it keeep it reall peace out cole
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