Do you choose to remember 9/11
All those people who went to heaven,
Well I do and I'll say it proudly
For those buildings fell loudly
Not the one you call, but the event back then,
You all remember it, it changed every one in small ways
It is almost 5 years later this is my respect to them
By them i mean the fireman and police men who willingly gave every thing to enter.
The devastation of the ones inside
What was going threw their heads as they died,
Their families shall always remember do you?
I ask you this cause its not so far from home this is true.
By statistics every one knows some one who lost a loved one on this day
For that reason this event has helped me change for the better,
I remember this day as the buildings decay
The place called ground Zero.
Somehow there should be more done in their memory
I write this in their honer,
In honer to the ones who died there,
But in tribute to the few who survived
I choose to remember, But the question is
Do you??
Author notes
This was in HONNOR of all the people who died in 9/11, But also a tirbute to the few who lived
Written August 3rd, 2006
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You put a lot of thoughts into your shit. You have a great skill for this style of writing.
Oh yeah, your the douche around here lol
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I love when people honor those who truly deserve honor. You have captured this emotion quite well. I like this poem. Its a great write. Thanks for sharing it with the all poetry family.
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great job. this is a great tribute to everyone that died and there families. it was beutifully written. good job.
~~Britt~~
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someone taking a stand to remember, it's good. These kinds of events do need to be remembered. You wrote this really well, I applaud you
*two friends* ~A~
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this is a vary good poem. i like the meaning behind it. you need to work on the rythem just a little bit. but i have no room to talk i dont think my work is good and ppl love it. if u look at my early work theres a few poems about 9/11. like i said this is good
Keep up the good work
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excellent presentation
What a wonderful tribute you have written here. I am so glad to see that you have reminded us all of that terrible day, when so many died. We should never forget the fire fighters, policemen, etc. who risked their lives, and some gave their lives on that day.
Great write!
Ethereal Melody
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Great Work! I remember 9/11 and my pops lost so many good friends at that day. God bless everyone!
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great tribute to the men and women who died. wonderful write, keep it up. Allie.
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it is a little bright i might chang it thank you for the coment.
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the ending was a great closure to this poem, it summed it up, a tribute to the living, and not the dead, GREAT job, but the color is hurting my eyes lol the red is soooo bright o.O lol
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I love it..I remember 9/11 it was the sadest day of my life I lost family members it was so sad I will always remeber it..Keep up the good work on the poems
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thank you for the monet i just wanted to honer those who sufered in this lose.. keep it real peace out ~Cole~
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Wow! Your poem is so touching. Keep up the fantastic work.
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