It's your day. It's all about you.
You love him and he loves you, too.
You've been with him for what seems like forever.
You've been dreaming about this since you first got together.
It's your turn now. It's been years.
The smile on his face eases all of your fears.
You line up with your dad at the end of the aisle.
Nobody in that entire room can mistake your smile.
The "Wedding March" begins to play and you both begin to walk.
You hope that when you get up there, you'll be able to talk.
You look up to see his friends and your friends waiting.
It takes all you have in you to keep from fainting.
You get to the end of the aisle and your dad kisses your cheek.
That boy gives you a smile that makes your knees weak.
He holds out his hand and you take it.
He looks very handsome you must admit.
Quickly enough, you exchange vows and rings.
You're staring into the face of your everything.
Then, comes the fun part... Sharing that kiss.
Congratulations. You're well on your way to wedded bliss.
Author notes
just something cute cause i was feeling in sute mood. plus, my older "sister" is getting married. yay!!
ummm... i guess this would fit in with option 2?
A contest entry
- Baby's getting Married :) by PoetsAngel.
300 points, ended October 17, 2006, 18 entries
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Congrats on the gold trophy. Yes this fits.
Thanks for entering this beautiful entry. You did a fantastic job bringing this to life. Good luck!
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This was sweet. I did think the rhyme was a bit predictable, but the sentiment of the poem was beautiful. Thanks for entering.
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Wow! This poem was so good and I loved the flow in it. My favorite line was The "Wedding March" begins to play and you both begin to walk.
You hope that when you get up there, you'll be able to talk.
You look up to see his friends and your friends waiting.
It takes all you have in you to keep from fainting.
Good Luck in this contest
Nikki
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Quickly enough, you exchange vows and rings.
You're staring into the face of your everything.
Then, comes the fun part... Sharing that kiss.
Congratulations. You're well on your way to wedded bliss.
I Loved that part I loved the whole thing really this is exactly something I would want to say to Nikki and Steve lol very beautiful piece it flowed well good luck and thanks for entering
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Well, this is a truly beautiful poem, but not what I asked for unfortunately! I wanted something to read to mathew during our wedding ceremony. It is truly lovely though and I'm not surprised that you won that other contest!!
Thanks anyway!
Blissful Princess
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Truly adorable write..Flow and imagery was great. Thanks for entering, and good luck Brenda
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amazing
This was beautifully written and very sweet. I liked it very much! Thanks for entering, and best of luck!
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this is cute!hopefully my aunt doesnt faint bc its a really hard floor hehe.but its cute!
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