I have
Been better
Been worse
Take me forward
Press reverse
I need you
Even though you hurt
I feel my breath fading
...I can't move...
Please pick me up-
I'm pleading
Falling
Fading
Shelter me from the world
All these promises
Went out the door
(with you)
The words you whispered
Must have all been a lie
A boy that loves a girl
Never makes her cry.
I want to shake you!
Can you not feel the pain
(in me)
In my words?
What you're doing to me...
You said you wouldn't hurt.
You think of me-
I know you do.
Afraid of being stabbed
So you stab me first.
I wait here
Helplessly
Wondering
Why you're gone
We were fine;
You said you loved me
Last time we talked
What happened to my incredible boy?
The one who would do anything
Move mountains
Walk to the end of the earth...
Is he hiding behind pride?
"What a man should be"
A man wouldn't leave me here
With this pain in my heart
Always
Endlessly
-Open up-
Those lovely hazel eyes
TO SEE
Everything
What you are giving up;losing...
Are and will be missing
This girl that loves with all her heart
That would give you the world
Please
I plead
Say you see
ME.
Author notes
Written August 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Want To Say Sorry To Those You Love? by moment liver.
500 points, ended October 17, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Heart Broken by SensualWhispers.
425 points, ended March 6, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is so intense... i love it..
"A boy that loves a girl
Never makes her cry."
i love those lines i believe that whole heartdly but wen im in a situation wen a guy can make me cry i still find it hard to get out.
i loved the first stanza heaps as well... oh kay i luved all of it
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Oh my gosh!
This is so wonderful. It has so much emotion and feelings. It is wonderfully written. I couldn't believe that the pain, the hurt, the want, the need, all of it was in there. Excellently done. You've done a wonderful wonderful wonderful job. Thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie
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thank you so much.
It is all true, and I'm trying to get passed it but it's hard, writing helps...
the last 20 peoms I've written have been about this.
thanks for reading,and I'm really glad you dig it.
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oh wow!! this was beautiful!! I can honestly say I loved it!! it flowed so well and the words you used were just right!! if this is true i hope things get better for you! I'm glad you entered this in my conest and I wish you the best of luck!!!
♥ ashley
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