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Nothing More

All my hopes have died.
Along with them my dreams.
These long gray endless days
are all that remain it seems.

I cannot see the future,
it's just no longer there.
A wasteland of nothingness,
stark and barren - bare.

Single words are left now,
milling through my mind.
Black hole getting deeper
and darkness feels too kind.

I have no wish to end it all,
but I no longer want to live.
There's nothing more to do -
I've nothing more to give.

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Written August 2nd, 2006

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  • morgan1127
    August 2, 2006
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    i have felt this way before. its a hard spot to be in. dont worry. it will all work out. good write. look forward to reading more of your stuff.