Strum softly, supple skin.
Sultry stroke,
Slide slowly, surrender.
Satin sheets, silky strands...
Sweet seduction.
Surround...stir,
Shimmering sounds subdue,
Silent sin,
Shocking storm,
Satiated, satisfied....
And Sigh!
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Written August 2nd, 2006
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No need for witty comments. Just you returning to the page says enough. Thank you Adrian.
Storm -
I keep coming back here
trying to think of something witty to say
thank you beauiful write
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OMG you counted them?!?!?! LOL
I am not sure where it came from. I had S's flowing on the tongue that night, and out she came. Thank you for the comments hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
A wonderfully exotic write Storm, everything, from the presentation to the form, are magical. twenty-six "S"'s in a row, and still great flow ...AWESOME
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Thank you for your comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
LOL, morning cereal melting huh? Thank you for the comments James,appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you Kari, appreciate your words.
Storm -
oh this is a masterpiece, very tasteful and passionate. Excellent work
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Wow Storm, this one just made my morning cereal melt right in my mouth. Grrrrr. Your sultry word strokes are amazingly satisfying. Keep them coming.
James
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Loved it!
This was awesome!!! Very sexy. Thanks for sharing hun I LOVED it. Great piece before bed hehe.
Kari -
Thank you for the comments. I love writing sensual and erotic poems. I appreciate your comments. And welcome to AllPoetry
Storm -
Wow...beautiful, sexy, and I long for more. Really hot...I love how you used the vivid detail of the setting to tell the story. It's the like sex, itself, was speaking. Thats scripting emotion...like a true veteran.
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Thanks hun. Appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Ooooh, how sinful! I like it! So, perfect. Gives me chills just reading this! Mmmm. Perfectly sensual!
sigh
I really did enjoy it!
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