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The Lady Has My Attention

She is not there for me, she is just there. As she walks, I make unexpected noise. As I hoped, she turned to see what it was. Her expression said it was obvious I made the noise to get her attention. It also said that she did not mind.

She changed direction slightly so she would have to walk closer to me. I started walking so that my path would cross hers. She smiled as if we had agreed upon this and she was pleased.

"I am not who you see." she said.

"I am not myself." said I.

She flashed me the most beautiful tits I ever saw. I passed out. When I awoke, she was gone. Her panties, however, were stuck in my mouth. Her phone number is written on them. I think this could be the start of a beautiful friendship. I will bring smelling salts everywhere from now on.

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I have no idea where this came from or what it means, or do I?
Written August 2nd, 2006

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  • Allure of a Rose
    July 5, 2007

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    Hahaha, that's fucking awesome.
    I'm generally the flash-er, so it's nice to know how much you enjoy it.

    If only I could be the flash-ee more often...
    Up for it?

    -Allura

  • Desire gold member
    January 6, 2007

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    Oh My Gosh-


    You have the most Creative Mind
    I was inhaling this verse and almost choked on my drink when I got to the last three lines
    Thank goodness I know CPR

    Oh My what an Erotic Adventure You have posed~
    and yes~
    bringing smelling salts would be a good idea~
    I carry them also...
    Never know when You would get a duplicate encounter...

    Thank You for sharing this and bringing forth a

    Keep that ink flowing~~
    and Your Creative juices going~~~

    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PerVirtuous gold member
    August 15, 2006
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    I thought it was hilarious. I really am that stupid with women. It never occurs to me that they do what they do because they like me. I am always looking for some other reason. So I am truly shocked whwn one shows me attention. If one was to flash me, I would probably fall down at the very least. Once I understand, then the fun happens.

  • PoetsAngel
    August 15, 2006
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    You really do have the makings of a great story here...Am I the only one who found this funny though???

  • burntoutandwasted
    August 8, 2006
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    yeah, i agree with everyone else, it would make a great story. i cant wait to hear it.

  • Goddess of illusion
    August 6, 2006
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    It would make a great story, loved this one, and well writen... : illusion

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    August 4, 2006
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    Yes, I would kiss you through the window, monitor, cellphone, or other device.

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    August 4, 2006
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    As you wish, story is pending. As soon as I have time.

  • Jennefer
    August 3, 2006
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    I love this.

    Please make this into a story. It would be the best ever.

    -jenne
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