With conflib and undorted fabe
He was confizzed and didn't crow
"What to dee?" he asked of me
and this is whit I told -
"You must persult the Werble Tree,
For he will pointle koit,
And whent you fimbly sulter him
he tell you kwan to loit."
So fort he quence to fork the Tree,
and gonce and foam he bound
He fimbled many twerdies
on the port where Tree was found.
Whent he rept the Werble Tree,
he drowt before it's mance
And asked it humbly for its vice
and here is its respanse -
"When you are conflibbed with fabe
and confizzled to the crow,
what you dee is tack le bee
and then you'll always know."
Author notes
See what you make of it 
Written August 2nd, 2006
In a list
- My Favorites--These are poem from some poets here at AllPoetry that I really liked. All poems are listed with author's permisssion • next in list
A contest entry
- RANDOMNES!!!!!!!!!!!11! by Dirax.
400 points, ended August 8, 2006, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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good job in the contest
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very good
great fun poem , i loved it but then again it made complete and utter sense congratulations on a well earned trophy keep up the stranger work 
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great
wow this is a great poem it really reminds me of Jabberwocky 
i wouldn't be a bit surprised if you get the gold 
i think this is the best poem in the contest so far it's the only one that makes sense (in an odd sort of way)
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Wow out of all the poems I read for this contest this is defininatly my favorite. I like how even though they are made up words, they sort of have a meaning somehow. I was reading theese contest entries to see my conpetition. I like thiis poem alot. I hope you win if I don't. BUt who am I kidding of course you will win.
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Prigh Fwibble braf ne gow!!
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side splitting
Merry meet,
this is tooo funny! I love it. Nice going on giving it the feel of Jabberwocky. I must agree with Flurry on the fact that it made no sense but at the same time perfect sense. I would love to put this on my author's page, it's hysterical.
Amythest -
Amazing
This was fun to read. It's almost like the younger sibling of the Jabberwocky. I had no idea what you were talking about, but at the same time, it made complete sense. It was awesome. I think I'll go and read it again..... Awesome job!
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