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Happiness begets Happiness

After much contemplation
This is the advice I offer thee
Happiness today begets happiness tomorrow
And the place that happiness resides is inside all of us
It's that little voice inside
The one we never listen to
It can not be taken from one and granted to another
For each possess their own
If, while it lies inside, one ignores its provisions
It couldn't possibly be obtained from a deal that weakens another
That's selfishness, not happiness

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Written August 2nd, 2006

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  • August 5, 2006
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    That is very true and I agree with your words very much.
    Good advice for a Dear Abby person to be reading.
    I liked it. MississippiGirl


  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 2, 2006
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    Very well done and very well said. Thank you very much for entering and good luck.

    Hugs and bites, Vampy