© Bob Barra, 8-02-06
Sister so sweet,
And truly amazing;
On Him you feed,
His word you’re grazing;
You pine for a love,
And I’ve seen you break;
Desiring love so much,
It makes your heart ache;
Yet look at love’s paces
All around you;
In names and faces
Loving you true;
And they come
For you’re so sweet;
When they’re undone,
You make them replete;
Your heart so broken,
So breaks for them;
By Love, you’ve spoken,
Against evil's din;
Now all these faces
Come in His fashion;
With love’s divine paces,
Bring eternal rations;
The fragrance of Christ,
About them so lingers,
To melt the dark ice,
Like God’s loving fingers;
So heart of God,
Know this is true;
By word, I laud,
What’s seen in you;
The breaks and the falls,
Are used for the good,
Along with life’s stalls,
You’re formed as you should;
Hear your heartbeat,
This rhythm of Christ;
In Him, complete,
Through Sacrifice;
The call of the Lord
Is upon you;
Greatly adored,
For you, this is true!
For Sandy
Author notes
Paying it forward...
Written August 2nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Pay it forward - a gift of a smile for someone worthwhile by WarrioroftheHeart.
300 points, ended August 16, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks for your comment, Stuner. I wrote this for a sister in the Lord.
To answer what is the most important comment you made to me, I do have the Lord Jesus as my Savior and God. I seek to follow Him daily in all I do. Thanks for bringing that up.
May He bless you, as He has me.
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WOw this tto is a great poem. The person who started this contest is going to have a hard time picking the 1st place winner. This is a beutiful piece i loved it.
Keep writing and Take care
God Bless you
I hope that you have the Lord in your heart and Jesus Christ as your savior.
Stuner
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Honestly, it took me a while to find what you were paying forward, but an amazing return thank you for entering
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that is a very touching poem, i have written a poem about each of my sisters but have not been able to publish them yet.
i am sure your sister would have been very touched by this.
i would really appreciate it if you would read my poems when you have some spare time, and told me your honest oppinion on them.
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i love this poem cause i have sisters to
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Thank you, kind sir...God bless ya!
Interesting name...Santiagothor... -
wow..this poem is really good...keep on writing! goodluck
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WONDERFUL POEM
Oh my, you have made me cry. But they are tears of joy which I welcome. This was truly beautiful and you honor me beyond words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. It is things like this poem that God keeps blessing me with and makes me look for the strgth I need on my bad days. I have come so far since I found God 2 years ago but not as far as I will or can. I know in my heart I can do better and that He is worthy of more from me. And with friends such as you and the others on here and at my church, I shall stumble less and less each day. You do bring out the best in me and I thank you for that. I love you for that my friend. I will always be here when you need a friend. You are a blessing. Thank you for this heartfelt poem. God Bless you. Sandy (SissyPoo)
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Thanks, Kutless Lover! You're a blessing.
I probably don't have to say 'God bless', since you already are, but I will anywayz...
God bless ya!
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This is very nice. Way to pay it forward.
Sandy will truly love this.
God Bless you Bob. -
Thank you, young miss...
God bless ya!
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I love the poem you wrote
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