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Happy Bday Storm!!



The first time our paths crossed we were at war
I loved your answers, those creations I adore
I got to know your tastes in writing
Naughty, sensual, all pretty exciting
Your life at this moment seems close to my own
Attention you gave made me feel less alone
All in all I am glad to count you as my friend
You battling at my side, our home we defend
Stormgoddess, you are a kind soul to me
I am sure that your beauty is there for all to see
Heart warming creature, rare in this day and age
I love your writings and scour through your page
For your birthday I wish you nothing but the best
And hope all your pain and sorrow be put to rest
Gifts I would give but live too far away
So I'm sending you my love and hope it will stay

My love to you, happy birthday Autumn!

Anne



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Happy bday Storm!!
Written August 2nd, 2006

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  • dutch2lips
    August 6, 2006
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    Thank you John, that was one hellova battle yes
  • johnh94
    August 6, 2006
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    Silver and Gold, what a pair! (speaking of pairs....!) You're so wonderful, I'm looking forward to getting to know you better! Congrats on the silver, and I think the only reason I got the gold was because they WERE looking for erotica! I remember y'alls' little sparring match from the war! I really enjoyed that! be well, and much love, John

  • dutch2lips
    August 4, 2006
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    Thank you, she deserves it!

  • Hekate gold member
    August 4, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    This was very precious thanks for doing it for her.

    Kari

  • dutch2lips
    August 4, 2006
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    Thank you darling Tang

  • intanglio2ring
    August 3, 2006
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    My Dearest dutch2lips,
    (sigh) Wonderful ladies and I get to hang with the best of them. A wonderful birthday wish for Ms StormGoddess.
    Best of luck to you in this contest,
    My love to you,
    Tang

  • dutch2lips
    August 3, 2006
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    Thank you my dear, and yes a splinter feeling better I mean

  • The Crapaud
    August 3, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem in honour of Stormgoddess's birthday. I am not sure I remember reading any of her work but will now having read this
    I hope thinks with you are at least a tiny bit better

    Blessings always


  • dutch2lips
    August 3, 2006
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    Thank you Jeannie

  • dutch2lips
    August 3, 2006
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    Again, thank you for your kind words John You make me feel humble.

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 2, 2006
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    Very beautiful and heartfelt poem. Thank you so much for entering. Good luck. Jeannie D Hunter
  • johnh94
    August 2, 2006
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    My Holland maid, what touching words! Beautiful tribute to a pretty wonderful lady! The more I read your stuff, the more I like you! you say heartwarming creatures are rare these days, but I find more and more of them on AP all the time! thanks so much for sharing this! much love, and lots of laughter! John

  • dutch2lips
    August 2, 2006
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    thank you my dear girlfriend

  • Recluse Writer gold member
    August 2, 2006
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    Beautiful tribute to fellow battler.
    Do hope this makes her Birthday complete.
    Good luck sweetie
    GF

  • dutch2lips
    August 2, 2006
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    I ment every word my dear

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 2, 2006
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    Anne, thank you so much. I appreciate your words and your friendship very much. This touched me very deeply, and for your kind heart, I am smiling.

    Good luck in the contest
    Storm
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