diurnal drama
drawing back to center core
eternal set to sun rise
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Written August 2nd, 2006
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slen derspid er.
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awesome as always
well one thing it is thought provoking.. well done..
even though i'm not one that gets into haiku's...
just thought i'm come read ur stuff it's been awhile.
and after reading this i see i have already commented on this,,..lmao I rock the short bus,,.....lol
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word of the day Becreative (one word.. lol) good job and hope ur doing good.
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Thanks PF, and yes you are right sunrise is one word
But I'm a rebel, and I broke it apart for artistic effect--> set to sun rise<-- its just silly play.
Thanks so much for dropping by and commenting! -
Oooooo this is so pretty! The wording is excellent. I have only one suggestion: I believe that "sunrise" is one word. But maybe that;s just me.
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