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Fire Blossoms



fire blossoms from tips of timbers

shadows flicker brightly

unadorned moonlight gently falls down

silver limbs  translate windy hymns

with soft green voices

amidst this bewitching circle

the two of us hunker down
***

fire blossoms from tips of figures

blazend across velvet sky

Striding warriors with sickle and bow

sling unkind and passionate whims

in the form of choices

amidst this bewitching circle

the two of us unwind

***

fire blossoms from tips of fingers

tracing elements of fleshy desire

igniting loves magical cauldron

and soft cooing noises

amidst this bewitching circle

the two of us are known
***

Author notes


Written August 2nd, 2006

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