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Pluck A Daisy

daisy from the field
stripped of petals one by one
loves me loves me not.

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Written April 7th, 2003

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  • Kevin Moderators member
    April 26, 2003
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    i wonder what the significance of 'yellow center, white petals'? I can't help but want to apply it to real world. Perhaps old/tarnished and newness on the outside?


  • candyxrain
    April 23, 2003
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    aww this is so pretty!! It's childlike..simple..and innocent. The perfect haiku =) good luck in the contest!

    God bless, shine 4 Him!

    JuLz