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Back Into The Darkness

....
Trapped Inside My Mind.
No One Can Help Me.
Darkness Fills My Body.
I See No Color.
No One Here.
It's Lonely.
All I Can Do Is Think.
Of My

"Life"

"Friends"

"Family".

I'm Caught Inside An Alternate Reality,
A Reality I Consider Home.
[The Darkness My Mind]

After a While,
I Am Too Lonely.
So I Come Back Into The Light.
When I Ask Myself Why I "Left",
I Take One Look Around,
Realize The Answer.


And Drift Back Into The Darkness.

Author notes

I Really Dont Why I Was Inspired To Write These Words...I Just, Did.
Written August 1st, 2006

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  • littlesmile
    August 6, 2006
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    this is a good poem i like it a lot well keep it up

    littlesmile