the edge is as far away as you want it to be!
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Written August 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- One Liners~ Number Five by Vickie J.
300 points, ended August 3, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great one liner....truthful in every sense...take care catch you later...
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powerful words stated, those few words remind me of my life! take care! i read the other one liner's in the contest, and i think your advice is the most inspiring! you get the gold from me!
Edited on Aug 16, 3:56 p.m. because 'i read the other one liners'. -
its hard to write oneliners.sorry to hear you have been poorly and diagnosed with pstd i love your oneliner its very apt for me as i felll off once right off and it was very frightening i am now terrifiedto to death of the edge and i am tied to the armchair as we speak.
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Cool one! Thank you for your entry!
vj
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