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Lie for Me

Your beliefs are scrutinizing
Your words cruel and harsh
Fists from home
Sticks and stones
Does the charade ever end for you?
A fake smile to woo a girl
A fake laugh to woo your friend
Do I get a fake I love you, too?

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Written August 1st, 2006

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  • yukitosumi
    October 22, 2006
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    ooh that kinda reminded me of PLath--with the sing-song tone to it. very nice

    Hugs!

    Elyse

  • Ankita DG
    August 2, 2006
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    Wow! Harsh poem! One of a kind. Never quite read something like this. Certainly taken aback!! Quite an effect I must say.

    Thanks for participating, and good luck.
    Keep writing
    Ankita