Crisp, Greasy fries.
Hearty, thin burgers.
My hands are shaking
To grasp that sandwich and devour it.
This food isn't over-rated,
And it's got me under a spell
With it's Ronald McDonald
In this fat-food masquerade.
Author notes
Describing America's obsession, it's brain-washed by these corporations.
Written August 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- 10 Lines Or Less- Anything Goes by The Pole Star.
300 points, ended August 6, 2006, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I agree that text color needs a change. Ok, this piece is really funny and I now want to convince my father to order a pizza
Best of luck!
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Understandable, always a good topic to write about.
Suggestions: This text color is wicked hard to read.
"With it's Ronald McDonald" <-I think it should just be its without the 's but I could be wrong, wouldn't be the first time..
Just want to check out some of your other stuff
Good luck in the contest,
Haley~
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