BOOM
The who's the whats and whys,
causing redness across my eyes.
BOOM
The images when I'm dreaming,
with voices continually screaming.
BOOM
Lots of people are pushing past,
and today just may be their last!
BOOM
Life has no special potion
to cure the bustle and commotion.
BOOM
It's pointless to point out the pain,
as I punch into the table again.
BOOM
BOOM
BOOM
Author notes
I hate everything loud, noisy, pushy people who ask lots of stupid questions.
and rather than lose myself in threatening behaviour against them, I take it out of my old oak table at home
Written August 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- ~ Thought Therapy ~ ...::: Anger :::... by -LilacThOughts-.
300 points, ended August 23, 2006, 17 entries
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hey ali just figured i would stop in and read seeing that i havent seen anything from you in a while...but i see why...i know at times i only make matters worse but i do miss chatting with you..you are truly amazing...hope things get better for you soon...i know its rough coming from someone who has never been through what you have suffered but i will keep you in my prayers..i truly enjoyed reading this poem it really made me think take care miss you bunches and love ya lots...
~~DI~~ -
I like the style this has been written in and its rhyming scheme...it comes across as quite busy and noisy so couldn't understand the title, 'BOOM' would be just perfect for it...
As I read the words I can actually hear the booming sound in my head, fists punching the table...also the hustle bustle of the crowd which always frustrates me when caught up in it...I like this very much
~Lilac~
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Hi there and welcome
~Lilac~
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