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Dance With Me(Senryu)

great music let's dance
maybe will lead to romance
your charms in my arms.

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Written April 7th, 2003

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  • sheshe143
    April 7, 2003
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    such a lovely haiku Billbard
    i truly enjoyed!!
    please visit my new haiku

  • PoetryGirl26
    April 7, 2003
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    this a really sweet hakiu..love it!