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Everything

You Are My Father,
My Parent And My Best Friend.
We Have Been Through Everything Together,
And We Will To The End.

You Have Been There For Me,
Through Happiness, Tragedy, And Death.
And You Will Be In My Heart,
Until My Very Last Breath.

On This Special Day,
I Just Want You To See..
You Are The Best Dad And Mean EVERYTHING To Me.

Author notes

For Fathers Day I Planned On Writing My Dad A Poem. I Had A Mild Case Of Writers Block, So Instead I Gave Him A Dvd [Pulp Fiction]. So Now, Once I Have My Writing Mojo Back, I Wrote Him A Poem, For Fathers Day Next Year. I Hope You All Like It!
Written August 1st, 2006

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  • MoontanningBliss
    August 6, 2006
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    aww that's cute! I like it a lot. I don't know how you see it as sad, i find it to be a very uplifting poem!