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Dear [Insert Love's Name Here]

Dear [Insert Love's Name Here],

I Just Think You Should Know....

You Are The One I Live For,
The One That Brightens Up My Day.
The One Who Makes Me Laugh,
From Everything You Say.

You Are The One That's There,
Everytime I Cry.
You Are The One I Need,
Without You I Would Die.

Your Smile Is Amazing,
Your Eyes Are Dazzling Too.
If They Didn't Look At Only Me,
I Don't Know What I'd Do.


So In Conclusion,
There Is Only One Thing I Have To Say.
For The Rest Of My Life I Will Love You,
Each And Every Single Day.


                                  Yours Truly.


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I Like It, I Think It Is One Of My Better Pieces.
Written August 1st, 2006

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  • OurxBeginning
    August 3, 2006
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    Awhhh, this is very sweet and cute. Love is so amazing and it's really worth everything that life may throw at you. Your rhyming was done nicely and I liked how you made it a poetic letter. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Left on the shelf
    August 2, 2006
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    Aww, it's so sweet. I'm not sure why you capitialized every word, though.