Nothing unnatural or nasty with the anatomy now
Not even naïve vacationers need be holier than thou
Nippy naysayers never outnumber the normal notions
Nor negative nemesis notorious to null ancient icons
Nudes native to noble neighboring nations expose
Noisome nurturing fountains wide open to repose
Novelties nice enough to nest your nickel’s wish
Narrowly noticing to navigate the nearby goldfish
Notable museums notify us with a nifty nonchalant note
Naming new announcements of the next marble to promote
Nuance necessary to negotiate even the novice necks nod
Neatly narrated with no nouveau neglected nor a fraud
Nag me with noxious nicknames from my granite nirvana
No naughty nimble tongue will negate beginning nausea
Neutral nerves neglected net a nuisance nestling a no-no
Neutered for the fallen leaf none of the narcissist show
Author notes
The picture is one of the statue of DAVID
Well, okay until I got cheap and gave up the cutsie SILVER.
Written August 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- Pick A Letter Contest. by Poetryintheblood.
300 points, ended August 3, 2006, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Over 250 Poems by zhaniswolf.
350 points, ended July 23, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i'm tongue tied slightly. definitely an odd poem. i kinda like it though. not a good thing in this contest lol, but we shall see what comes of it. good luck.
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Seeing it's you I shall certainly not toss you out (or indeed off) but you know and I know you are stretching a point here about fig leaves. Fig leaves were for covering modesty not displaying stains and lumps.
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I agree Tangy as always your work is amazingly beautiful , thank you and good luck
Josephine
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My Naughty Red Red Rose,
I'm not sure now but the chisel might have nicked too narrowly and now not frightening the nice ladies his manhood was notably slighted.
I glad you noticed!
Tang -
I LIKE IT BUT I DONT NO BOUT THAT PIC IT MAKES ME LOL AT IT
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Dear pattyann4500,
Thanks for enjoying - contest challenges are certainly fun to enter. Even when the "n's" are done!
Tang -
As always, your work is amazing! You have certainly found enough wonderful "N" words to fill your piece. Speaking of nudity and the beauty of it, you have certainly given David a new kind of beauty. Great job! Good luck in the contest, my talented friend. Hugs, Patricia
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Nubile nymphs nod nonchalantly
Nefarious n'erdowells needn't notice
nood nuck ninna nontest
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Dear Night Valkyrie,
Never could I imagine your tongue tangled!
Nor neglectful with nothing to say.
Now is when I thank you immensely for your wonderful compliment!
Tang -
My tongue got tangled up inside of Tang's words. Sheesh, that's a lot of n's. But you made good use of them.
I don't think I would have the patience for that, not right now anyway. Kudos to you dear Tang, Good luck.
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Dear Lady Stone,
Nice of you not to neglect David in your compliment!
Now I certainly thank you for wonderful words.
Tang
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Nifty, neat,never, thought I would get to see DAvid on here! lol
great job with this and good luck to you in the contest!
Krystal
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