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The Ocean

The ocean holds many secrets
dark, mysterious, unknown.
Lives have been lost in the abyss,
dark, mysterious, unknown.
Feared creatures lurk in the shadows,
dark, mysterious, unknown.
lots of seaweed says aimlessly,
dark, mysterious, unknown.

Author notes

NOT YET FINISHED, WHEN I THINK OF MORE LINES I WILL ADD THEM ON- BUT I HAD NO PAPER SO I THOUGHT I'D JUST POST IT.
Written August 1st, 2006

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