Lazy bass slumbers
Immersed in Halcyon dreams
Sharp-eyed eagle dines
..........
Black widow spider
Sporting hourglass figure
Consumes ardent mate
..........
red purple pink gold
colors washed in ocean waves
day’s death sets night free
..........
Salty sand dances
Cool waves roll upon the shore
Music in their roar
..........
Fire sanctifies
Transgressions against nature
Purity endures
..........
I can hear echoes
Reaching for my shattered soul
The beat of your heart
..........
bride dressed in white lace
flawless blue eyes shining bright
dreams and flowers – crushed
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
These are some of my attempts at haiku; I hope they were worthy of your time.
Patti
Written April 7th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- GET PUBLISHED in the AP JOURNAL volume 2 - Haiku by Kevin.
250 points, ended April 28, 2003, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
Very, very nice haiku. I love the images it puts in my mind. And thank you for commenting on my son's poem Trees, Flowers. He was thrilled to recieve such praise.
-
Thank you everyone for all your wonderful comments. I'm glad you all agree on which one is your favorite. LOL Now I'm even more confused about which one is my best then I was before. (Still laughing.)
-
my favorite was 'fire sanctifies', hopefully it makes it off the finalist list
There are so many good ones in this huge set to sort through!
-
Yeah
I love Haikus lol
I like the salty sand dances
Good luck hon
Thanks for your comment on my poem
Its sorta how i am now in my marriage after 21 yrs
Luv ya
Susan
-
Good job
I really enjoyed this! The ending was truly touching. like that dreams and flowers... Good job!
bride dressed in white lace
flawless blue eyes shining bright
dreams and flowers – crushed
-
Personally, I liked these 2 the most:
Salty sand dances
Cool waves roll upon the shore
Music in their roar
..........
Fire sanctifies
Transgressions against nature
Purity endures
I hope you find success with these
-
the last two are fantastic... stand out.
i enjoy them all though. good luck to you angel.
much respect.
la-. -
These are wonderful.I would also like to wish you good luck in making the journal.Great write
Sherri
-
These are all very nice! Good luck making the journal.
This one was my favorite, i believe:
Black widow spider
Sporting hourglass figure
Consumes ardent mate
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
1 old applause
