I want to lay you down in a bed of roses
To make you feel the love I have within
Tonight I want you more than ever
I want the power of our love to begin
I’ll pick you up and carry you high
Into another world in the starlit sky
I want to see your eyes
As I send your emotions into bliss
Show you a world of eternal happiness
While you are lost in the sensations
Of my warm and tender kiss
In this world that we are in
The roses follow our lead
Surrounding us with their scents
As I fulfill your every need
Your hands begin to roam around me
As our hearts beat as one
Our bodies begin to sweat heavily
Underneath the warmth of the rising sun
I pick up a rose and tease you with its petals
Kiss you all over your body until
My lips are as dry as metal
As our love heats up the room
We look into each other’s eyes
In our hearts we know it
There is no disguise
Every second that passes us by
We fall more and more in love
And with every single touch
We know just what we are thinking of
I want to lay you down in a bed of roses
I want to see the world through your eyes
I want to know your every thought
I want you to be very honest with me
As I am with you tonight
I have never felt this way about anyone before
I never thought that these feelings could ever exist
But, now I know because I have found you my love
You have shown me the meaning of true happiness
As our sensations increase you painfully cry out my name
In turn I cry out yours too
As our bodies wind down together we remain
My hand on your heart and your hand on mine
We are bound by our love until the end of time





















I loved the ending, the way the poem climaxed and then ended with a sigh of love... wonderful 






















anyway, it was moving and passionate. you can see the love growing between the lovers. great job and good luck!! 




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