Blackened inside my mind
Answers I cannot find
What am I really looking for?
Shadowed thoughts passing through
I don't know what is true
Why am I even here?
I don't understand what's inside
I just wish that I could hide
I do not understand what I see
I do not know what I will be
I don't know how to get ahead
When I feel so dead
In the chaos that is my life
Words can feel like a knife
Cutting into my mind
It can suck just being here
Clouded up by my fear
Sometimes I feel so lost
I just with that I could hide
Seemingly no one to stand beside
Broken are some of my hopes and dreams
Parts of my life fall apart by the seams
Trying to sift through every lie
Looking up at my shattered sky
Author notes
I don't completely understand this poem, but I put alot of emotion into it, and it is the most personal poem I have written...
Written July 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Misery Loves Company by Danna Hobart.
375 points, ended October 16, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Thank you for entering.
-
Yeah exactly one week late actually lol!
-
wow. i feel like this at times. i hide it well i think but inside im broken. problems with my mom are tearing me apart. but anyway. great poem. oh and happy belated bday. i think im like a week late so sorry. well see you monday at school.
amber -
WOW!!
Good god! Wow!... This was amazing!... It was really sad, but amazing!... I really liked this stanza:
In the chaos that is my life
Words can feel like a knife
Cutting into my mind
It can suck just being here
Clouded up by my fear
Sometimes I feel so lost
I can relate to this soooo much, it's like you read my mind... Wow... I'm actually speechless... Really deep, powerful and very emotional... I hope things get better for you soon
... You did an amazing job with this!... Keep up the great work! 
♥
-
this is deep i like it
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
1 old applause
