Richard was a very rough random rhino
Rabbit the reigning royal
raided the royal radish garden.
Ralph the rotten red rat
rowed a raft to the river shore.
Roman Rod rolled down the roasting roof.
Rebel Ruth rose up to the rising rocket.
Robin Risk says goodbye in a roar.
Author notes
I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this! It is a little short. I hope you like this piece!
Written July 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Pick A Letter Contest. by Poetryintheblood.
300 points, ended August 3, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very different and great fun.Well done on this one.I would say it is RRRRRRiveting!!!!!!!!, Ros
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Bravo
Nicely penned. The letter R, just rolled off your tounge. Good luck in the contest.
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Hey, my tongue is in knots and ties, but it seems you did honor to the contest rules. Cute little poem. It was a random "click" for me and I enjoyed the hazard's choice.
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great =)
This is really good. I liked it. It is cute. Short and sweet. I liked this part: "Rabbit the reigning royal
raided the royal radish garden." This is a very creative poem. It takes a lot of thinking to come up with that many words starting with the same letter and to make them all make sense! Keep up the great work. =)
Your AP Cuz,
--Shadow--
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Hi Horsecowgirl:
I can't believe I never made a comment on your entry. It is marvelous. I just love the line about Ralph the rotten red rat, and the last line. Nice jingle to it. Keep up the good writing. -
Alliteration galore...
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Very well done and very creative. It reminds me of tonuge twisters my grandmother would give us to say fast, when we were
young.
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Thank you for your most wonderful entry into my contest, good luck
Josephine
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thia poem was very interesting and i liked it
wild thang -
This is really creative. You use a very good choice of words here. I hope you do well in the contest.
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