O Commodore!
Why not sit down for awhile
I know its not your style
Other women go for Jack
But I wouldn't do that
Ill undo my blouse
Your manhood I will bouse*
Slowly unlace your breeches
Slurred will be you speeches
Elizabeth is nothing against me
Don't worry, you'll soon see
With your head set back in pleasure
Ill ride your manly measure
Ill get on-top
Look on down
My gowns in tatters
on the ground
Come on James
I see your excited
Open up your dirty side
Your being invited
Now you get on-top
Yes, make me whole
Give it back please give it back
Its my sanity that you stole
I knew you had it in you
Getting into the game
Your face is getting hotter
Its the sensation to blame
Thrusting like a sword
You should know this by heart
Your work and hidden passion
Not so far apart
Keep up with me James
Go faster, I plead
We'll finish together
Beat this pulsing need
Eyes burst
Breathing stopped
We orgasmed together
Until we dropped
You smile that cute smile
My blood starts to heat
The arousing wetness returns
O commodore! Please mistreat.
Author notes
I have a sexual obsession with Commodore Norington and was looking for an excuse to write some erotica with him. Dont get me wrong, i love Jack, but he is to popular, and Commodore looks much more fun to corrupt. ^_^
*bouse= nautical term, to lift or hoist!
Written July 31st, 2006
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Congrats on the Gold. Well deserved!
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great
Great job you did with this.. Very creative and had a great flow..lol.. I loved this.. I'll surely be looking out for more of your writes..
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Nice you can see the actor in the movie The Wedding Date as the groom-to-be by the way...
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Wonderful...write more. ^_^
I am pleased to see a Commodore corrupting person here. ^_^
I was really hoping someone would do at least one with him in it.
I'm allowing everyone up to five entries so If you wish to write more norington escapades please feel free to have fun. You might get inspired...^_^
I would really love to have more norrintong stuff. Feel free to try and out do yourself.
This has to be the best erotic poem I've read. Really good job.
Thanks for entering and good luck ^_^
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